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Chad and Taylor

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Chad and Taylor.

Based on friends of mine in High School Musical: On Stage.

(c) Disney
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© 2010 - 2024 Phillippeaux
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I love the shading you did for this and the style you used! You have a really neat art style! It makes me slightly jealous. ^_^ I also really like the eyes… I’m not sure why, but I just love how you made them!

Though, whenever I comment, I try to do mini critiques with my comments. So yeah, if you don’t like hearing about things that might be wrong, please stop reading this comment now!

So, while the girl’s eyes look great, the eyelashes seem a little off. I mean, they look fine, but compared to the solid colors everywhere else, the sketchy look to them just doesn’t seem right. Like, maybe it would be better to have them be darker and more solid like her hair and eyebrows are?

Also, I can see that it’s part of the comic like style and all… but the girl’s mouth seems just a bit too off center. It almost seems like the pointier corner goes up a bit too far on her face compared to the other side, giving her a slightly lopsided look.

Finally, while I like how you did the hair, I can’t help but to nice that the guy’s hair doesn’t seem as detailed as the girls. I mean, it still looks good, but the detail difference is there, and once you notice it, it becomes rather hard to ignore. I do understand though that blond hair is a lot harder to add detail to than brown hair, so I get why it isn’t as detailed looking.

Overall though, I really like this picture! You have a really neat art style! I think I’ll just have to start watching you! ^_^